briggsy1996

Hi there! I've read other poems that you've written and I must say that even though a lot are short, they are excellent! This one especially, I could relate to- ...

Hi there! I'm not a huge poetry reader, but I personally have never read anything like this! Onto the poem: I thought it was brilliant! A lot of the time ...

Hi there! I'll get to my overall thoughts in a moment. First I'll go through and highlight errors: Mindy Kay was my best friend or so I thought. I watch ...

I posted a similar prologue some time ago- I tweaked it a bit. I placed it under action and adventure novels although it has some elements of sci-fi and fantasy. ...

Hi there, I see you're new, so welcome :) Ok, so on to your story- wow. Like, wow, this is really raw and solid. Gruesome throughout, for sure, but overall ...

Hi there, To begin, I generally liked this. It was a little hard to follow at certain points, but overall it wasn't bad and I see a lot of potential ...

Hi there! First off, I love the emotions portrayed in this piece- it's very real and relatable. It also looks to be in place spelling and grammar wise, so good ...

Hi there, Man, this was deep. Like, really, really deep. The overall feel of this poem was very raw and it possessed this sensational edge that gave me the chills. ...

Hi there, This was amusing to read. It's simplicity was what made it a good piece of writing, so for that I congratulate you. Everything seems to be in order ...

Hi there! I very much enjoyed this poem! Silently they wish for more Upon some Island, some distant shore And so it weeps, and so it cries -This all reads ...

Hi There! Romantic stories are my favourite... they may seem cliche or cheesy to other people, but I love them. So if you ever need someone to help you with ...

Hi there! This poem has some amazing imagery. And as the words fall onto paper, I can feel my heart breaking. -That's my favourite part. Beautiful job, not much to ...

Hi there, Wow, this was...wow. I really was touched by this. It was short and raw, and conveyed your message perfectly. In my opinion, there's nothing to edit content wise- ...

Hi there! This is more of a comment than a review: I just thought is it cute and wanted to say nice work! Keep Writing, -Briggsy :)

Hi there! I admit, as I was reading, I hadn't a clue as to what show this was based off of, but then I read in the novel description that ...