briggsy1996

I miss you so much that I think I am losing whatever sanity I had left. Of course it changes day to day- sometimes I am given the strength to ...

Hi there, I love this! It's so sad, but it's eloquently written, and has a certain sophistication to it. You're descriptions are dead on- the perfect amount. Suffering doesn’t know ...

She didn’t say it out loud, but I was nearly 100 percent sure that my mother was not happy with me. It was either that, or the waiter had put ...

Hi there, I...wow, I can't think of proper words to describe how much I enjoyed this! You got me right off the bat with the piano and their little music ...

Hi there, This was interesting and ... amusing? to read. Not that the content was amusing, but the repetitive words were. It brought to life the inner workings of this ...

Hi there, Overall, I liked it. It all came together in the end, and had a very real quality to it. What I might suggest is lengthening it, and adding ...

Hi there! I love your photography! And I love pumpkin patches... I love fall in general! Thanks for sharing :) -Briggsy

Hi there, this has a very... magical, feel about it. For the majority of it, it all seemed very fluffy and nonchalant- good though, for a prologue. The ending though, ...

Hi there! There was something so... smooth about you're poem. It was very fluent; easy to read. You have some good metaphors and the way you've written this is very ...

Hi there! I love your poem- it is so sad but brilliantly written. It was very memorable, in my mind, for several reasons. The imagery was accurate and meaningful, and ...

Hi there, I'll get down to the wire since any nitpicks I might've thought of have escaped me now that I've finished reading. I legitimately felt as though I was ...

Hi there! Personally I liked the last opener the best and I'll do my best to explain why. First off, it's the only one you've listed here with dialogue- not ...

She didn’t say it out loud, but I was nearly 100 percent sure that my mother was not happy with me. It was either that, or the waiter had put ...

Hi there! This was excellent! I like how she's arguing back and forth with herself throughout the story- it makes it so interesting to read. The content overall was sad, ...

hi there! I love love love every portion of this story. It was absolutely brilliant, every dialogue and description is flawless! I cannot even explain who much I adore this ...