brassnbridle

Definitely needs excitement and detail, I got to agree. JK didn't go more than a couple pages at the most without something exciting or intriguing happening. Also, try to crispen ...

I agree about needing to get into your character more, but I like the tone you established. Just build upon it! I'd like to see more in-depth work with the ...

I think its great. Seriously, I have no complaints, and I didn't find any grammar or spelling errors. I personally like how its written, because it really lets your character ...

Thanks!! :D

I started this because I just love the series- suggestions and opinions are more than welcome! Let me hear what you think! The name is definitely not going to stay, ...

Oops... sorry! Totally forgot that minor detail, lol. It's a high fantasy-type novel aimed at younger young adults, if that helps.

I just wanted to say I loved this! To me it sounds like a cross between the classic Rapunzel tale and Book of a Thousand Days . I really enjoyed ...

This was amazingly well-written- I didn't find a single grammar error or awkward sentence in any of it. That brings me to my only comment- length. The post is really, ...

I have a project that I'm working towards publishing and I really want to start looking into it. Does anybody have advice or suggestions as to where I could get ...

I like that you started out right with the action, something to keep a reader interested past the first few sentences.Grats on the great descriptions, as well. I would've liked ...

First, I just wanted to agree with the posts about switching tenses, as that can make it rather confusing or just strange. Personally, I have a pet peive with present ...

You could replace the archers with crossbowmen if you feel like it, just know that, while crossbows are easier to learn, they have a significantly shorter range than one can ...

It caught my interest, too. Could you pm me and let me know where and when it gets posted?

sounds good thanks :) Ok I've got another one- hope it doesn't sound too stupid. I have an older story I posted here quite a while ago and I've decided ...

is there any way to delete a story you've already posted? Say, an old project your no longer writing on, or whatever?