brassnbridle

This is the first part of a book I wrote for school because our teacher challenged us to. I have no idea if it's any good or not, or if ...

I haven't read the original Artemis Fowl book for a while, but if my memory is correct, Artemis uses a computer to decode the fairy book. I just read Artemis ...

I think I enjoyed your first chapter more, but only because it was a little more interesting. You do a good job describing their actual reactions, but I'd suggest going ...

Leaving aside elvin dialog, as it is up to the author, i think your beginning is very confusing. I had trouble keeping track of who was who and how they ...

Help! Help! I did a review and hit the save, and it told me it saved, then disappeared. My review didn't show up posted, and i don't know how to ...

I like you fit this story in between the origional Harry Potter books. In my opinion, you have the character's personalities, speech patterns, and interactions down great . It's very ...

Hi, still new here. I've got a long chapter book I've written recently, and it would take forever to post 1,500 words at a time- is it too long? I ...

I think you have a great story plot! It catches your attention right away and is interesting to read. Just a couple of suggestions, though- In your prologue, i think ...