brassnbridle

I know it's an old post but I just wanted to say I absolutely loved it and I think this could make an awesome book if you added to the ...

I think it was very well written- only a few nitpicking things. "What are you doing out at this hour Serf? There should be a coma after hour. The man ...

I have to admit, the whole seeing a 'dream' as a baby concept kind of threw me, but then again its probably supposed to. You write suspence and intensity very ...

I agree- parts of it read awkwardly. Try to think of how you would say it if you were reading out loud or talking to someone- it might help you ...

Hi, could you review my fantasy story? It's called Redmont from Tranview. topic53168.html

It's an awfully short chapter- not much to go on. I did like the two sentences beforehand, but the story is sparse. The two dudes in black with briefcases was ...

I know this review's incredibly late, but I like Harry Potter and just wanted to say my part. I think you did a good job with this, and like some ...

Thanks for the help and taking the time to review!

Would you mind reviewing my story? It's fantasy, called the Horse from Transview, the first chapter of what might become a book. topic53168.html

Hi, I've just recently posted my first story and have no idea what to expect as far as how good it might me. Would you mind reviewing it? It's fantasy, ...

Hi, my story's been up for a week but not getting much attention... not sure if I'm just being impatient or not, but would you mind reviewing it? It's fantasy, ...

One thing I'd like to say is that I don't like the tense, but that's just my opinion. As far as the story, it was very hard to follow. After ...

The grammer mistakes I saw have already been mentioned, but I wanted to tell you I like your story idea. It caught my interest and by the end I was ...

You write about the Harry Potter characters so well - their reactions and dialogue and interactions- I love reading your stuff. It makes me laugh just like the origional books ...

This story was interesting from the begining, and I just loved how you narrated it. I didn't entirely understand the part about owl eyes, though- as in color, or shape? ...