brandenwallace

I am a Pentecostal Christian and was wondering if there are any others.

Nirvana vs. Train

The Bible was most definitely not written by one person. It was written by many different people over thousands of years. I am a Christian and know quite a bit ...

Has a lot of potential... After a revision or two it will be excellent.

yeah he does sing You Raise Me Up, or one version of it at least, he is great

listening to the black eyed peas... the song is Where is the love. my cd player has Josh Groban's cd Closer in it.

thanks for the critique. it seems nowadays you can't use the word wraith without people getting an image of the Nazgul from lord of the rings. thanks though.

I hate forums because nobody ever gives me any feedback on my writing :x

Sounds like you have a good plot and the detail is good... Keep up the good work.

Here's another part of my story. Slowly, things began to take form in front of Dathor’s face. He blinked his eyes and looked about once more. Things were still hard ...

i will add detail of the nighwraiths in a later section. thanks for the grammar tip.

This is my first post on here. Please comment on it. This is only a brief part of the story. Night settled on the small village of Tunvil. Nothing stirred ...