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I remember seeing the tornado coming straight at our school. Somehow I knew that there was something that I could do to help these people. People that I'd known for ...

I looked down at my hands folded in my lap and smiled to myself. This guy was cute but nothing extraordinary. He probably wasn't really interested in me anyway. I ...

My first post like this. Wish me luck! I sat down at my desk and took out my geometry book. I didn't care that this was actually Civics class and ...

I have changed this to first person. I hope that no one gets too upset about this but since I started on chapter 1, I realized that this story would ...

Hi, I'm Shella, here to review your writing, obviously. Well first things first. it is clear that the young man hates the smoke, "it" needs to be capitalized. as he ...

Hello, Emma. My name is Shella. I do not claim to know everything about the site but there are a few rules I can tell you about. 1. You should ...

reed

This was...interesting, but where is the rest of it?

Wow. Usually, I don't care too much for poetry but I happened to stumble accross this and I loved it. Most poems that I've read haven't been powerful enough to ...

Thank you all so much for the honest reviews. Originally, I was just going to post this on here and see how people like it. If they didn't, I was ...

Thank you so much for taking the time to help me with this. I already knew some of what you were telling me but it still helps to hear someone ...

I have to do a research paper for English. I'm doing it on how vampires are depicted in teenage fantasy novels. I pretty much know what I'm going to be ...

I think I found another spelling error that no one pointed out. Tear streamed freely down his cheeks, occasionally falling in her hair. I think that should be tears. Other ...

Grammar mistakes , I couldn't find many. Their true, at least some of the time anyways. Their should be they're. My parent's probably could of left me I think it ...

Well, that was pretty sad But I thought it was pretty well written. Everything was so descriptive. It made me want to be there with the characters. You must have ...