brainychic212

confusion

So today in my 11th grade English class, we had a guest speaker from a local college teach us more about poetry. At the end of his lesson, he gave ...

A Dropped Mirror As the light bounces off you, I realize that you’re not perfect. Like a dropped mirror, you’re cracked in many places. Crooked lines illuminate every scar, every ...

Hi! I'm here for a review! :mrgreen: I agree with what the reviewer above me said about this being a very good first try. It's much better than what my ...

Eh, I don't know this song, so sorry. I give it a 7/10

I really liked this. I usually don't like parodies because they seem so pointless and it's too much like a mockery of someone else's work, but I don't even care ...

Thank you both for taking the time to read and reply to this. Both of your explanations really cleared things up for me. I plan to continue to write poetry ...

I don't think this was bad. It was pretty short but you managed to throw some imagery in there that works. The second stanza, where you described the sand and ...

Hi there! I actually found this site because of friend of mine from school recommended it to me last year. :) I'm so glad she did. So what kind of ...

I have to agree with Hiadel here. I really liked his example with John Wayne. There are plenty of westerns and I don't think I've ever heard anyone complain about ...

8/10 I'm not sure if this is from a movie or something...

Hello, this is my first time reviewing lyrics so what I say here may be totally ignored. :) The start are gazing down on you Telling you’re the only one ...

:) Blue Raspberry, you changed two letters in the word...but no biggie :) tree

alone

Well, it's an off-day at school and I didn't feel like dressing up this morning so I'm wearing jeans and a T-shirt, with a hoodie over it. Does it matter ...