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Chapter 4: School I jumped up out of bed the next morning as soon as my alarm clock went off. I ran into the bathroom and stared at my new ...

Wow! I love it. Itis so gripping and you can really feel lenas emotion. I felt sad reading (notin a bad way) Ilove this and it reallly does make you ...

WOW i love it. Please i would love to read the rest soon! I'm going to give you a gold star it was so Good! Please keep writing! borntoshop :)

WOW! what can i say? I think this is good and it is very violent and strange. But in a good way. I found it strange how the girl at ...

Very good i like how the ending links to the Beginning. A few things when you say: But where i am the sky is as black as pitch. Is that ...

Well Done! I think this is very gripping and ilike the words you have used throughout the text. Like ... Lure and realistic. I think you did very well on ...

Chapter 3: Changes I pushed the door of the house open and ran inside. “Catherine?” mum yelled panic in her voice. “Yea, mum it’s me.” I said as she flew ...

Please tell me what you think. Chapter 2: Conversation I felt a hand touch my shoulder and gently shake me awake. I got such a fright. “Get away from me.” ...

This is the first chapter. Chapter 1: Text message The one simple text messages that could ruin anyone’s day just arrived in my inbox. Those seven words that make you ...

Yup i defenatly like your storys, very gripping and it still kept me intereseted the whole way through. Once again can you PM me when you have the next part. ...

Oh and please PM me with the next part i would love to read what happens. Cheers Borntoshop.

Omgosh i don't know what to say. Well i've got to say that is so great, it felt like i was reading a book i would get out at the ...

Im sorry and yes i will move to fiction Okay Borntoshop.

Omgosh so TWILIGHT, NEW MOON, ECLISPE, BREAKING DAWN. They are awesome, and also (Silver is for secrets) Thats a really good book.

I thought this was a great story, it was gripping and made me want to read more, and find out if she dies and what happened to her. Okay just ...