borntoshop

I felt that there was to much talking and not enough, paragraphs that could build a very good picture in your head. Don't get me wrong it still got a ...

Please tell me what you think is it good? How can I make the characters better? Chapter 2: All through class I got notes chucked at me one’s that made ...

I love it but i do like all your stories, you make them so real and put a lot of emotion and use good words. I thought it was very ...

Forgot to give you the star here you go! Oh and by the way why were they laughing at a funeral?

Omgosh!!!! I love it please please hurry with the nest chapter i NEED to know what happens please PM me. Thanxz Borntoshop. Love it sooooooo much please get the next ...

Does anyone want the next chapter?

Hiya im not very good at reviews! I love your story so much. But it seemed like avery short chapter. Is it part of it? Once again please PM me. ...

(Is it worth continuing, please rate out of 10) Chapter 1: Why was everyone staring at me? Did I have something on my face? Did I have something stuck to ...

This is good and it has abit of humour in it! It shows what kind of girl maria is and i just thought that this was very good. And i ...

Wow, that was great!!! It really captured the depth of the emotion, and i don't no what to say i just thought it was great i loved it. You could ...

Okay i love it, it is really gripping and it makes you want to know what shes done to make everyone hate her so much! Love it Please keep writing ...

Eddies side of the story: Chapter 1: Break-up Eddies point of view. I knew this would hurt her, but I had to do it I didn’t feel the same way. ...

WOW This is very good i hope so much that you write more oh PLEASE when i was reading it i was hooked and i didn't even realise it had ...

Welcome to YMS I really liked this story, i don't know if you were going to carry on with it? But i think you should as i found it gripping ...

Hey me again, i really LOVE your storys you are going to be a GREAT author with books in librarys everywhere one day. I LOVE this it really is great. ...