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Hi :D Thank-you for commenting and sharing your opinions on my story. I very much apprecitate it! I'm not being lazy because i left my mistakes, it is unfinished is ...

hahahhahahah :D Even though i am a fan of Twilight i found this very well written and creative. I liked the way he just gives up on trying to convince ...

This is a story i have been working on for awhile. Please tell me what you think, i know there are mistakes i just want to see if you think ...

Thank-you for your help Kamas. Just like to say something though - u said, 5 - you forgot a 'the' between until and morning. If you read that part again ...

If anyone had read any other of my storys, you will find the story "The Missing." The same because this is Peytons ((The girls who got kidnapped)) side of the ...

Thank you for your reply, this is only the first part of this story. It is describing the atmosphere and where she lives and what its like to be where ...

I drove slowly down the familiar street to my house trying not to look at anything but the road. But i still managed to spot them - it was pretty ...

Yup i will post a little bit more soon.

Wow i really liked this. It described lots i found it captivating. Can't wait to read the rest i really want to find out what those guys want with Noah's ...

Yea she was kidnapped, hence the title called "The Missing" I only wrote out a little bit last night on the comp but will write more soon.

Her screams still rung in my ears three years later. It was loud, blood curtling, terrifying making the hairs on the back of my neck stand up right. I remember ...

It sounds a bit like Twilight!?

Could you please review please... Love Hurtsin Borntoshop's profile Haha:)

Very much appreciated! Not sure if link will pop up but it's on my profile, Love Hurts!

Great Job!! Well Done CONGRATULATIONS!!