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WOW! *speechless* That was....amazing! You really captured the pain of this girl. And i love the way you ended it, that last line about her not smiling, just made me ...

Thank-you both for commenting! Ziggie - Okay thank-you! I will go back through and change things. This is why i love other people reading it, i like it when people ...

Hi there! Sorry i'm not very good at reviews, so i'll just tell you what i thought about your story. WOW! I really felt bad for Issiah. I had to ...

Hey everyone! This is part of a short story i'm writing. I haven't finished it yet, i was just wondering what you guys think about it. Is it good? Should ...

I don't really get this?? Maybe i'll read it again.. And guess what?!!?1 My name is Carly :O Good choice of names! :D!

Thank-you! I will go through and check my story over again. VioletJune- No, i am not from America. Why is that?

I'm not a poet, but this was really good!! I liked it very much! It connected with the girls fear, and it explained things well! Awesome!

hahahahhahaha LOL! Nice! I do agree with everyone else too. Rap verse! Very easy to read. :D

Very well written, and well thought out! You are very good at this, and it sounds like you've had some expierence??? I liked it. Very very very true! Good work.

I liked this! I could never write anything like that. (I'm no good at poems!) But that was really good! I enjoyed it. Just listen to the advice people have ...

Prologue I was thirteen years old when I was kidnapped. I slept soundly in my bed which was on the second story of my house. Always I use to think ...

hahahahhaha LOVE IT!! :D Awesome twist at the end! Wasn't what i was expecting!

Just btw, Peyton was going to be a girl.

Just btw, Peyton was going to be a girl.

Just btw, Peyton was going to be a girl.