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Hey Silly! :) I reeeaally LOVE the first one, that is SO SO pretty!

Hello! Born here xx haha that sounds weird. Anyhoo... I was kind of confused with the first one, but i think it's quite cool! I saw the reflection pretty much ...

Hello! Born here xx haha that sounds weird. Anyhoo... I was kind of confused with the first one, but i think it's quite cool! I saw the reflection pretty much ...

Hey! I told you i would review your story! :) And here i am... Okay first off, good start! You really captured the way a child would be torn between ...

I'm going to read it again! :D

I'm going to read it again! :D

I really like this piece of work, ALOT! I like the way you described how your mum did things before she went to bed, even though she said she was ...

Extremely touching peice of work! I'm so sorry about your mother, it must be hard to live with someone like that. I agree with everyone you should give this to ...

Thrillhouse - Why does she not deserve your sympathy? That's a bit harsh. Wow! This is really sad, you wrote this well though. I'm so sorry you feel so depressed. ...

I found this a very good piece of work. Short but good. Are you going to carry this on? I reckon you should i was just getting into it! This ...

WOW! That was really good. Is this the end of the story? Were Rachel And Audrey best friends? Or sisters? I really liked this! I liked how you showed what ...

Thank-you! And yes, i thought about that when writing it.

Hey! Here is the ending. Tell me what you think please! And guess what? I'm entering it in the competition, i'm just going to do it, and if i win, ...

I really like it too! Very creative and random...made me laugh. I agree with Lilly when it jumped around abit, but i liked it anyway. Well done! :D

I like this! It kind of reminds me of Avatar (have you heard of that?) I want to see what happens next!