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Thank-you! I can see where you are coming from. I tried to make Lindsay sound popular, by the way she gets pulled along by everyone (most bullies i know are ...

Hello. Please leave me a comment, even if its not a review. Just tell me what your opinons are of this piece, dislikes and likes. I am entering this into ...

This is very good! I agree with the others, just a few mistakes, simple mistakes, if you got through and read it again you'll be able to notice them. Very ...

I don't know how to delete this...??? Please tell me if you know how. Cheers Born. :)

Thank-you i'll take your advice on board. :)

I REALLY enjoyed this. I have no nit piks. Great work, keep it up! Born xx

WOW! This was really sad! I actually felt tears come to my eyes near the last sentence. But remember your punctuation, most of your questions didn't have question marks on ...

Thank-you for the tips. :) I wrote this quickly last night. I just felt so angry at bullies, and i just had to write something! All of the things that ...

Dear Diary 17/2/95 They were saying stuff again today. Mostly Sara and James. I wonder if they know how much it hurts? I wonder if they know that every time ...

This was an AWESOME piece of writing! I loved it!

Hey :) These are quite cool! I like the last one. I've always liked pictures like that, when you can see some of the writing. Cool :)

WOW! I have no nit-piks. I LOVED this, it was amazing! You have a great vocabulary and it really shines through in this piece of work. Keep writing! Awesome! Born ...

Hello! (Mistakes are in Blue.) I really REALLY like, no LOVE, this piece of work. It was well written and i liked how you ended it. Only a few small ...

Hey! :) I really did like this piece, short but sweet! Very nice :) The storm had begun in the early summer night. The lightning lit up the dark night ...

SILLY! :) I thought i'd stalk all your work. Naaah only joking...or am i? Hahahaha Anyhoo.. I really like this piece, i thought it was sweet. But i sort of ...