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Hey, Born here! So you can paint the blank canvas of your existence with color. LOVE it :) That is a really awesome way of putting it. Totally awesome :) ...

You know what sorry guys! But brontobeawriter , I didn't threaten not to write anymore,and you made me sound a whole lot worse! I deleted that comment,Just to suite you! ...

Okay, so this might be a totally stupid question but ... How do you upload photos on here? I need help!! :) I've never done it before, so yeah :P ...

Still very good (: LIke, like, like.

WOW! I Love it. Please, keep writing! I want to know more :) Born

Hey :) I really liked this. It has pontential to go somewhere. But maybe lengthen it some more.

I don't have any nitpicks. I love this! It almost had me in tears. It was just amazing! Awwwwwwah D: Born presses 'like' :)

I really really liked this :) Great work. The only thing is, why are they seperating?

Oh right! I get it now. :D PM if you enter another story, i'd love to read what else you have written.

This was really good :) One question, how could they save the baby? Because your MC is just telling her boyfriend/husband now that she is pregnant. How could he not ...

I really liked this ! :) You have a real way with words, and i was captured right from the very first sentence. One question, was that man a figment ...

Awwwwwwwwwah !! That's super sad D: How did Sterling die though? That's one thing you might want to mention. And also, go through and check your grammer and punctuation. I ...

LOVE the last line :D!! Born presses 'like'.

I'm not good at reviewing so i'll just leave that to everyone else. Just thought i'd say i really really liked this story!!! :) Born pushes 'like' ! :D

I liked this. Very emotional piece of writing. So did you make up that poem? That was just...wow! I liked it :) Keep writing! Born