borntobeawriter

Shubhi! (You'll never escape that name, you know that, right?) Sorry it took so long, Mama's busy! “A ride?” he clicks his fingers straight in front of my face. I ...

Emmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaa! A little bit of fair warning would have been nice? I mean, you asked whether you should post, but you never let us know you actually did. Unless I ...

Hey there Violet! Glad to be the first to catch this :D I would like to ask something: if you don't post consistently, would you please give us a brief ...

Hello there daughter! I liked this very much. I remember the previous version of it, and you're right: much less convenient. Don't have much else to say, still like Jot's ...

First reviewer, boo-yah! but after Elise was destroyed, the black streak came and would not leave. It looked very noticeable The part in bold bothered me much. I felt it ...

Hey there Icy! Tis me! Ok, well, there's a thing or two I want to mention here! First off, the meadow. The last time she was in one was with ...

Hey there Jessa! I thought this was beautiful, but I'm not a poem critic. The one thing I wanted to point out: Close my eyes and take a deep breathe ...

Hey there Icy, tis me! Okay, I thought this was really good. The one issue I had is: “Where are we going then?” I asked curiously I usually don't mind ...

Daughter, tis me! He took a deep breath and began. “My father is lord of the Wolelands fief, and I am his heir. My sister, Thelia , is a maiden ...

Snoink, I'm first! Ok, I think this was my favourite chapter in a while. I love the father-daughter relationship, so real, so true. I loved the dialogue and what we've ...

Hey there Snoink, Here for a review. Excuse my tired brain (I blame the baby :D) This was a very fast-paced chapter. A lot of questions and answers fired back ...

SNOINK! Tis me! “Sorry, Iluve,” Alzan said cheerfully. Lomones felt Alzan grab his shoulder and drag him up to his feet. “You should go to sleep, my slave. We’re be ...

Hey there Chelsea, thanks for the request! This was interesting, really interesting. One thing I noticed that Icy did not: “I’m so sorry” I heard him whisper. A thud sound ...

Hey there Icy! I just read 9, 10 and 11, wowee! Sorry I didn't comment before but everything that needed to be said was, so. Here I am! Have you ...

Hey there mrawesome, back for the first chapter! “Are we there yet?” My sister asked for the trillionth time since we’d left the café…which was like, fifteen seconds ago. “Amy, ...