borntobeawriter

Hi, I'm here to do a review (obviously), I'll do as best as I can. First of all, I loved the beginning. Personally, I felt myself reach for the alarm ...

Hi! I wanted to mention that personally I don't find Rose to be spoiled, but she is slightly unemotional. She feels no rage that everyone is taking over her life ...

Hi, my name is Tanya, I also really loved the story. So far, trying your hand at creepy is going well. I also thought the beginning was a bit weak. ...

I generally enjoyed the story but, at first, I had some difficulty following your train of thought. Maybe it would have helped if you had given the man at the ...

Wow! That was a great excerpt! I'd love to read the rest of this, whenever you get around to writing it. You have an intriguing way of bringing your story ...