borntobeawriter

Tis me again! I had skipped school, I knew it was bad thing but I feared running into Hunter. Staying at home alone was vexing, so I had gone out ...

Pinky! Here to edit the rewrite! Blocking out their conversation, I turned to Olivia who was gawking at her Grandfather , Dr. George Evans, in complete astonishment. Why is the ...

Holy Penguins (taken from my husband) That was awesome Jash! Like Pinky said, the music gave me chills, the words were beautiful and haunting. Wowwee! Very nicely done. I want ...

Hey there Star, I'm Tanya, here for a review! Well, I just went to read your previous chapter but I didn't comment because all that needed to be said, was. ...

Hey Katie! Well, again, this was short and sweet. Me likee :D I have a couple nitpicks: Seeing me laughing by the stream, he gives me a look, then confused. ...

Rach! You posted the second part, yay! Well, I loved this part, but you already know that. I find that you've created good strong characters that have distinctive voices. Nicely ...

Hello, friend! I'm so glad that you've decided to post more; I've been waiting impatiently for this. Off I go! She stared at the open space above the stairway they ...

Hey Ignis, First of all, Bailey, you really should go back and read them all; it's a great story. This chapter is but a small sample :D That being said, ...

Emmaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! Tis me, Tanyaaaaaaaaaaaaa! (I'm a regular rhymer, aren't I?) Brighter and brighter they grew, until All Kieran could see was the white light. you capitalised the 'a' Her eyes ...

Feeling Hunter’s Ford Explorer park, I let out a brief sigh. hearing, maybe? “No!” I shrieked, feeling fear invoke me, coursing its way up my throat as his lips pushed ...

I'm baaaaaaaaaack! Well, that took a genius figure out. missing a word here. To? Annoyed, I smirked, “Olivia, if she didn’t tell you then what makes you think I would? ...

Still me. Surprised? ;) “Anyway, if Luke did anything to make upset himself , it probably has nothing to do with you.” himself upset. Since Dad’s death, we barely spoke ...

Wifey, I'm home!! I mean, I hear for a review ;) “Hey, Luke…can we go now?” She asked when I didn’t reply. she A few minutes later, we were greeted ...

haha, this time I can do my review the traditional way! Flashing Luke one sharp Luke before getting up, he walked to a different table and sat next to some ...

Chapter Two (Lucas) If a child is born and raised in a home that is loving and nurturing, where there is complete truth about who we are, you can't give ...