borntobeawriter

Hey there Pointe, so sorry for the delay! Okay. I'm not sure why you wanted me to read this. You've already have many excellent reviews and they've already pointed out ...

Emmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaa! I'm here! I happened to look up in time to see you'd sent the email. Our link has not failed us! Vara didn’t know if she should feel touched ...

haha. I love this story so much! I thank my luck that happened upon it; I'm a better person for reading it. I love you characters and the ease with ...

Unfortunately, I am no good at reviewing poetry. But I wanted to mention that I thought this was beautiful and evocative and the title you chose fits nicely. Great piece, ...

Bick! Yay! I've convinced you! *You must post more. I am using the Force on you* *coughs* Maybe he could use this contract to his advantage too. If made his ...

My daughter! I can't believe this is already done. Ok. I have nitpicks about this one. But overall impressions I do. This is a good story. Good idea. But it ...

Hey there Ziggie! Thanks for the request! Now um , bring me my food and I will take my seat, alright. Do what you are good at and stop all ...

Pinky! Tis me, Born to be a ....reviewer! Hahahaha My phone rang. I searched for it inside me petite purse and pulled it up to my ear. “Hello?” my We ...

Hey there Emmy. Tanya here, as requested! :D Mellina sat cross-legged on her new, unfamiliar bed So far, I think this is a good beginning. It pulls me in. Makes ...

Hey there Nike! I'm Tanya, here for a review. Ok, first off, this was an interesting piece, but it was slightly confusing. The messaging, I would suggest, should be done ...

Addy! Thanks for posting :D “Ah, I see. Well, I hope your horse gets better than , lady,” said the second man It should be 'then'. Than is used more ...

Tiger! Thanks so much for posting this! I am still very much enthralled with your story and you are very talented. I don't have any nitpicks, but the only thing ...

Hey there! Coral, right? I'm Tanya. Well, I just read all three chapters and I have to say, you have talent. I love your descriptions, and although they tend to ...

Rachael! I love this. I couldn't find any nitpicks. THen again, I wasn't looking, I was busy reading! What's great about your chapters is that I get to fall in ...

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! Give me more! What's the idea with breaking the scene THERE? Seriously? *breathes in, breathes out* Ok. I'm good now. Sorta. I'M literally seated on