borntobeawriter

Hey there Nightly! Ok, well. Um. It is very unclear if the sin they're waiting for had to happen around them, or just happen. Why wouldn't Finch stick around, in ...

Ok Nightly. Back for another. You're going to have to work on your descriptions a little more. We don't get a real sense of who your characters are. Twice in ...

Hey there Nightly! Sorry it took so long to get around to this, but here I am!! This chapter in the middle of the rest is completely random. Why set ...

Snoink. I don't know what I expected to read, but this wasn't it. In a good way. The twist with hearing Elise was a good one. A nice one. Can ...

Silent, tis me! I always hate reviewing for someone who's so eloquent, because I feel like everything but. Seriously. (Concentrate on the story, Tanya!) Right....... LOL, Silent, this was great! ...

Now you've done it: made me feel sorry for poor Will. He's a jerk, but maybe he just doesn't know how to deal with his emotions well. *sigh* That's true ...

Annnnnaaaaaaaaa! *sigh* I love them all, I truly do. Ok, I noticed quite a few typos, but for the life of me, I can't find them again. I really enjoyed ...

Hey there Layla! Here for chapter one :D *** Inspired by Kristin Cashore's 'Graceling' and 'Fire' *** Vivian is a 16year old girl living in a fantasy world similar to ...

Hey there layla! Well, I must say this was an intriguing chapter. I haven't read the first, and maybe I should, because I enjoy your style. A few things to ...

This was very funny. A nice twist to a classic. I found myself feeling sorry for the poor lonesome wolf. :P The only thing I would cut out was the ...

Twit! I can't let begging go unanswered: here I am! That being said, you have such a great way of bringing your characters alive, of making them sounds real. I ...

.........then ask him about it, Zo! Geesh! LOL Ah, my friend, another fantastic chappy. Seriously. I found myself giggling as she rocked backwards and forwards. Would you believe, that for ...

Wow, Twit. Just Wow. I read this out of curiosity, and although, as it was mentioned, not much happens in this chapter, I have no complaints. You bring your characters ...

Hey there! I'm Tanya, here for a review! April was a cow anyway, she didn't deserve him she was way too fake My parents were away at work as always ...

Skinsy, tis me! I'm only reviewing because Nate told me to. Mouhahahaha *coughs* Seriously, though. My question is this: Why did Charlie suddenly decide to bring Austin to this cliff, ...