borntobeawriter

Hey there Day! Funny, because I meant to PM you about this a day or two ago, and then I completely forgot. Then, yesterday, while I was at work, I ...

Jagged - I'm speechless. Well, not really because I don't think that would be possible for me *smiles*. The detail and the imagery - époustouflant. Très bien fait. I loved ...

Hey there Tabby, I won't give you an-depth review: Jet was quite thorough. I will comment on the chapter, though. When you read about foreign cultures, strange countries or different ...

Hey there Eat, I'm Tanya. I haven't read the first part of this, and I'll only be commenting on the chapter itself. First off, I thought this was an interesting ...

Baiiiiiiley! Tis me! Your sister-from-another-mother. The threat was aimed at the bunch of misfits assembled around a teenage girl, and surprisingly enough, emanated from the center of attention herse

It was good of Lolli to point out something . I have nothing. Like seriously. Besides the fact that your Dragon is hilarious and entertaining, of course. I love how ...

Aw man, would you believe I am doing this from my ipod? Suz, my brain feels so heavy and I'm tired, so I didn't notice any mistakes. I just wanted ...

Ah, Bailey. I had missed Lulu, tis true. I was smiling and laughing *with* her, I swear! I have nothing to say, I didn't notice anything at all. After all, ...

Hello there, Daughter. Mum's here. With nothing much to say. *sighs* I loved the tone of it all. Jot makes me laugh. My only real issue has already been mentioned: ...

Well, hey there Paul! Tanya here for the last chapter. First, before I forget, please let me know when you post more. I don't have any nitpicks. I don't have ...

Hey there Paul! Well. Would I seem like a complete sissy if I told you I was teary-eyed throughout this piece. The part where he rips her memory and remembers ...

Hey there Paul, Thanks for the request! I'm not going to give an in-depth review because you've already got one. What I would like to mention is Death seems a ...

Hey there! I'm Tanya. I was stalking Azila's thread and saw why she refused this piece. It of course made me curious and I decided to come check it out ...

hahaha! Thank you for the laugh *wipes away tears of mirth* You should definitely keep this narrative voice. I could just imagine the dragon perfectly. I found no nitpicks, can't ...

Hey there Tori, Tanya here for a review! There was that face. It was so familiar. I knew it somehow. You say 'somehow' but the sentence right after, you know ...