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Re: Shifters: Chapter 10
lol me too but I get my sister so...I get the scene. And she is clumsy. But I love her
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Shifters: Chapter 10
I just can't picture this for some reason. How would her hands fly up and into her chin if she's pulling off her boot? What, Ranger? This has never happened ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Shifters: Chapter 10
Lauren - 'not to grab your butt' is what happens when us frenchies translate in our minds lol. It's not you, it's us :D
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Shifters: Chapter 10
Really? I'm the first one here? *gapes* Well, alrighty then! Although an easy task for most girls, I for one had never had the urge to wear any. I didn’t ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Five)
Another question (annoying, aren't I?) Does anyone know that he 'sees dead people'? I mean, in every book or movie, there's usually a close friend or sidekick or someone who ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Five)
Hey there Skins, It's me, Tanya, back for a 5th review! Okay, first of all, I thought the flow of this chapter was great. It wasn't erratic or difficult to ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: Love From Afar - edit
Hey there! I came to check it out and it is a beautiful piece. I say nothing more because I know nothing of poetry. I found it simply beautiful and ...
Apr 24, 2010 -
Re: UnAcceptaBle Part Two
Hey Dragnet, I'm here as requested. Sorry it took me longer than usual, I've been having problems with my laptop :D Compelled, I reached out to touch the truck of ...
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: My guardian dog 10 - OLD
Lauren, David, thank you! Yes, Scott was meant to be seen as having a sense of humour even through all of this mess. I'm hoping that's what comes out... Thanks ...
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Four)
Ok, last review for the day and I'm off to bed! For starters, I loved the chapter but I agree with Mr. Knightly: it isn't necessary to spend a whole ...
Apr 20, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Three)
LOL well, I got it right away -comment about the dead people in the cemetary- and I thought it was quite clever. Then again, I've just spent the last 2 ...
Apr 20, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Two ~ Part two)
Hey Skins! I want to apologize right now if I start making no sense at all! I'm way past my bed time lol. Ok, well, there's one thing that struck ...
Apr 20, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Two)
Hey Skins, me again for yet another review. Hope you're not fed up yet :D I have to say right from the start that I'm amazed at the leap of ...
Apr 20, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Old) Chapter 2
Hey Skins! Ok, overall, I must agree with I think it was Dreamy; this was an info dump. I'm not sure how to correct it but there's one thing I'd ...
Apr 20, 2010 -
Re: Can you see me? Chapter One/Prologue (Attempted edit)
Hey Skins. Just did the first chapter review, back here for the edit lol I liked the way you restarted the first part, sounded great. I have to wonder though: ...
Apr 20, 2010
