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Hey Conrad, You'd think I'd have nothing to say after all those wonderful reviews, but I do :D I thought you should leave out the part of her cancer altogether. ...

Hey there Conrad, Tanya here for a review! Okay, I liked this; it was really interesting. Kept me on the edge of my seat. What I didn't like was the ...

Um, is 'hussy' a bad word? Not where I come from. Hum... Anyway, Ember, another great chapter! Er, scene. I enjoyed it and I have no nitpicks about it. Vivica ...

Haha, funny because I was going to send you a pm this morning, asking where are the other scenes had went. Ok, Ember, great chapter. It flowed well and I ...

Hey guys, Thank you! You're all right, of course, I'll cut the shower scene out. And David, don't worry, she'll find where she's heading in the next chapter...It's written but ...

Ok guys, thanks for the great reviews! I'm sort of stuck on chapter 14 but 12 is done and ready for a critique! I hope you enjoy it because I ...

Unless I'm mistaken, Shubbi, that wasn't Annabel he was referring to. Why would she be surprised that he can see her; Annabel already knows he can... Skins, great chapter once ...

Hey Ember, ooooh! Intriguing! Plot twists definitely ahead! But...I agree with everything bond girl wrote before me. You have a tendency to skip scenes and years and it would be ...

Hey Ember! Beautifully written, you really have a nice style. That being said, I think a transition chapter er... scene is in order. We don't know Andrea, and I would ...

Hey Brokenwing, Tanya here for another review. Ok, as much as I loved the previous chapter, this one was confusing to me. The actions happened so fast, the mc when ...

Haha, I love this! Hi Brokenwing, I'm Tanya, here for a review. On to the nitpicks! The echo of harsh breathing could be heard down the hall, but that is ...

Hey etherealember, Here as requested (and it's my pleasure, believe me :)) Now, first I must mention that I've never reviewed a play script before. In grammar, this I noticed: ...

Haha, guys, just keep in mind that none of you expected Riley to actually be human; you thought he'd be a talking dog.... Thanks for the reviews!! ;)

Voilà! Enjoy! Chapter 11 The next morning I found Scott in the library. No sign of Riley. Not that I looked. Much. Scott was reading a book on a sofa ...

Hey there Skins, I have no nitpicks about the grammar and I have to congratulate you; the flow and the writing just keeps getting better at every chapter. What I ...