borntobeawriter

Yay guys! Thank you for the reviews!!! :D

Haha! Once again, I am first! (bite my dust everyone!! :twisted: ) You were right baby girl; I love this chapter!! I had action and tension and humour, woohoo! Now, ...

Hey there StoryWeaver! Great chapter although I personally preferred the mystery of the prologue. So, this is good, but still needs a little bit of work. I'm just going to ...

Hey there Jackpot. I'm actually reading the Prologue after having read the first chapter. Normally, I'm alright with prologues but not this one. It doesn't add anything to the story, ...

Hey there Jackpot, Tanya here for your first review! Well. Interesting. BUT you need a little help. You character's 'voice' is too formal. I assume that if he's no longer ...

lol Lauren, thanks! There is more than the simple twist, and yes, there is more to Silas's greed for will be more explained in the second. And I'll be able ...

Hey there Justismarez, I'm Tanya, here for a review. Now, I'd like to warn you in advance - this isn't going to be pretty but it should be helpful. I ...

Suz - was this the twist you were expecting or something more? ;)

Chapter 16 For a few blissful minutes following my arousing, I didn’t think of anything but Riley’s warm body against mine. I loved the feel of him, loved feeling so ...

I have brilliant reviewers, that's for sure!! :D Suz- RH is right, there is an expression that says 'lick their chops' :D Lauren- you're right; defenseless is written both ways ...

LOL Thanks Lauren! You actually had me stumped there with your question for a second or two, and I kept thinking, wow! She saw all that? LOL That's what happens ...

Haha! Hey Emma! Yay, I'm first! You know what's funny? I was reading quietly when I suddenly remembered that I'd hoped you'd post the 6th chapter so I got up ...

MY turn to be first :twisted: Great chapter baby girl, I did NOT like the almost kiss with Jimmy. Only because his name isn't Tony. I DID love the part ...

Ok, turned out I couldn't wait till the end of my little vacation. BUT there better be another chapter when I get back, okay? lol That being said, I agree ...

LOL, well, I definitely don't hate it but I was confused. Once again, the flow was beautiful and honestly I should stop repeating myself but I envy the ease with ...