borntobeawriter

lol, Tooth! Sounds great! Hope he helps! :D

Okay, wow, this is different. Hi there, rude of me not to introduce myself; I'm Tanya :D I didn't find anything to mention that bluewaterlily hadn't already but I'll tell ...

Hey there, I'm Tanya, here for a review. I'm not sure how I feel about this prologue. The beginning really pulled me in but near the middle, I was skimming. ...

Well there, wow! Hi Talulah, I'm Tanya. Honestly, I didn't find any mistakes so there's nothing to mention. I really enjoyed the setting of this story. Much different from Vampires ...

What? I'm actually first? lol. We should get a prize for when that happens :D Okay, well, Emma, once again, I found no grammar mistakes. This chapter felt more transitional ...

Okay guys, there's only one left after this one................... Chapter 21 The trial had been going on for two hours. They called it a council meeting, but it still felt ...

Be kind? Not likely :twisted: I'm sorry, did I say that outloud? lol Seriously, hey there, I'm Tanya, here for a review. Well, you've already been advised to separate your ...

I had wanted to write a note afterward and ask everyone if the kiss was okay, not too anti-climatic and not too mushy-gushy (as my sister would say!) lol Glad ...

Chapter 20 My eyes fluttered open as I tried to figure out where I was. I was on a bed, underneath covers. In my old room? A soft smile spread ...

Hey Lightdevil! I really liked this chapter! It was completely original and I caught myself smiling several times when the book/Svinx kept retracting what he was saying. "Wait, I'm sorry, ...

Helllllllo! Finally here!! Sorry about all that delay time, I've been so busy! But I'm here now. And frankly, I don't have much to say. It felt more like a ...

Thanks everyone for the great reviews! Yes, I'm going to have to add on to this, but only after I'm done with it. I'm going to send it out once ...

I totally agree here. I have my own desk with all my writing material but I do my best writing away from it all. Actually, I write better at work ...

As I write my chapters, I feel conflicting emotions. I am glad that my story is nearing its end, but I don't want to finish writing it. I love my ...

Hey there RH! Sorry for the delay but I actually spent the weekend away from my precious internet! *shocking!* :shock: the only nitpick I have is here : Your face ...