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Re: Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons (22)
Emmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaa! A little bit of fair warning would have been nice? I mean, you asked whether you should post, but you never let us know you actually did. Unless I ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: The Tattoo Engineer - 2.1 (Revised)
Hey there Violet! Glad to be the first to catch this :D I would like to ask something: if you don't post consistently, would you please give us a brief ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons [edit] - 3
Hello there daughter! I liked this very much. I remember the previous version of it, and you're right: much less convenient. Don't have much else to say, still like Jot's ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (15)
First reviewer, boo-yah! but after Elise was destroyed, the black streak came and would not leave. It looked very noticeable The part in bold bothered me much. I felt it ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Chapter Thirteen
Hey there Icy! Tis me! Ok, well, there's a thing or two I want to mention here! First off, the meadow. The last time she was in one was with ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: I Do?
Hey there Jessa! I thought this was beautiful, but I'm not a poem critic. The one thing I wanted to point out: Close my eyes and take a deep breathe ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Chapter Twelve
Hey there Icy, tis me! Okay, I thought this was really good. The one issue I had is: “Where are we going then?” I asked curiously I usually don't mind ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: My Guardian Dog - 6 Rewritten
Ok! For some reason, I still can't scroll down to put stuff in italics. Please bear with me. I just realised that chappy 6 was way too long so I've ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
Thanks Matt! Hope I'm doing this right, but I'm having troubles with the side bar. I can't scroll down and put highlight anything, the text goes up and down like ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons [edit] - 2
Daughter, tis me! He took a deep breath and began. “My father is lord of the Wolelands fief, and I am his heir. My sister, Thelia , is a maiden ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (14)
Snoink, I'm first! Ok, I think this was my favourite chapter in a while. I love the father-daughter relationship, so real, so true. I loved the dialogue and what we've ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (13)
Hey there Snoink, Here for a review. Excuse my tired brain (I blame the baby :D) This was a very fast-paced chapter. A lot of questions and answers fired back ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Writers of the Future!
No prob! :D
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons [edit] - 1
Daughter! So glad you've started posting this. I didn't see much difference with the first version, but it was a pleasure to read Jot again, in all his scaly glory. ...
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: Writers of the Future!
The Contest has four quarters, beginning on October 1, January 1, April 1 and July 1. The year will end on September 30 Four times a year you have a ...
Jun 14, 2011
