borntobeawriter

Hi there Loller, I'm Tanya, here for a review. An ominous "ka-thunk" echoed throughout the small valley. Birds fluttered lightly overhead, and the morning's mist began to burn off as ...

Hey there Stu! I'm Tanya, here for a review! Born into this world on an isolated island under the glow of a blue moon, son of a farmer. This sentence ...

Curious, I ask, “Is something wrong?” Trenton looked distracted. Trenton looks at me with realization and says, “No, everything is fine What? Huh? You should maybe maybe first that he ...

Oh yes! One more thing! While she's talking to Trenton and Jerrard...Why aren't her thoughts overcome with her grandma's kidnapping? Shouldn't she be worried, desperate to find her?

Hey there KR!! I'm Tanya, here for a review. My thin coat that I wore over my small dress made of beautiful silk that was once my mother’s who died ...

Hey there secrets, I'm Tanya, here for a review. I'm warning you right now - it isn't going to be pretty. But here I am, a mug of hot coffee ...

Hey there Lady, I'm Tanya, pleased to 'meet' you. I won't go through the mistakes made throughout this piece because Bluewaterlily and Stella where rather thorough. I've just come to ...

Lauren....Wow. It was an important even in the eyes of the remaining public, important enough to waste the few remaining building materials. event, maybe? She was even clothes in a ...

Well, I purposefully didn't tell you about it. It's been hard...:( But I didn't want to spill the beans! Yay!

Thanks Lauren! I knew it needed work but I didnt want to blow my word count. Glad you enjoyed it. Tanya

Hey baby girl, I'm back for more. I screamed awake, and almost fell off my bed if not for Tony pulling me by my waist I personally don't like the ...

Hello fellow reviewers. I am submitting this (after much editing) to a short story contest that allows for any genre/any type of story at all. I need thorough reviews - ...

Oh no! She wasn't supposed to appear uncaring - she simply wanted to shock Scott out of his melancholy. And it worke but apparently I didn't no that well...Sorry! Thanks ...

Haha just wanted to mention that i am first again. Loved this chappy, we will back for a more thorough review. Love you

Well,she said that she is having difficulty remaining concentrated so i sent her a gift and said that he souls make sure that she stayed focused. If not he will ...