borntobeawriter

Well hey there Tori, I'm Tanya, here for a review. First of all, I would change the title because it gives the story up right away. That being said, I ...

Thanks to Kyllorac who helped me with the web page ....:D Tanya

I like the hat one too. (or three) but I really like the sweet one too....Hmmm Not very helpful. eh? ;)

Snoink, great post! I remember when I started how little I wrote because I couldn't figure out what to say. I decided to go through the forums (once i figured ...

Hello Mossyra, Here I am, back for the second chapter. But if she went back to sleep, the nightmares would only come again. The air outside was fresh, and it ...

Hey Kr, Here for the 9th, as requested! :D I wake up covered in sweat. My breathing is rapid, my heart beating in my ears. The tips of my fingers ...

Hey everyone, I'm Tanya, and this is my first posted topic. Well, I think it is. Hmmm... Seriously, I was browsing the net (one of my fave sites is Writer's ...

Hi vox, Back for the second installement. Well, this was an improvement from what I just read - but not by much. I agree with everything Andy said up there ...

Hey Vox, I'm Tanya and I decided to check out your first chapter. Here are my thoughts: You have created a very interesting world and although I'm a big fan ...

Hey Mossyra, I'm Tanya, and it's very nice to meet you. Prologue: So far, you're off to an excellent start. Words obviously flow easily for you, and I was lulled ...

Hey Kr! Here for chapter 8! I smiled, “Sometimes I forget that your human.” you're. It is the contraction of 'you are'. “What’s out there?” Trenton scanned the forest. This ...

Well, Pink, I'm here!! Haha, another great start to a story. Phoenix has already picked out the mistakes I noticed, so I won't go over those. You definitely have me ...

Wow, Pink! I have no talent whatsoever so I am very impressed with what you've done here. I leave all the technical stuff to the ones better suited for this, ...

Rh! Borntobeawriter is rather pleased that you have posted but you didn't send a PM to borntobeawriter so she COULD review! LOL On to it, then! She felt bedraggled and ...

Hey Kr, I'm Tanya, here for a review! Then he would open his eyes and sit up straight again. I would prefer something like 'he jerked awake and sat up ...