borntobeawriter

I mean, don't leave us again. You'll be sending me PM's to review and I'll be like, huh? Who are you? Emma who? Nope, doesn't ring a bell! :P lol ...

Hey Kr, thanks for letting me know about the edited version :D My eyes shoot open, my lungs grasping for any air that they could reach. I felt my fingers ...

Hiya Pink, Sorry for the delay! Well, this was pure awesomeness. Seriously. I loved that Luke finally loosened up a bit and I can't wait to see them interact more. ...

Emma, glad you're back! Well, my sister quoted the exact sentence I wanted to. *Sigh* great minds think alike. Seriously, this advanced well. There's one thing, though. If I remember ...

Well hey there Tristessa, and welcome to young writer's :D Okay, I'M going to be blunt here; your story needs much work. Thankfully, you've found us and we'll be able ...

Suz - thanks a lot. Need to rework this. Will you read it when I'm done? Love you !

Hey there Pink! Please, don't feel ridiculous about sending us PM's! We don't always have the time to go around and visit the forums and would miss out. Well, PM ...

To all of you who have reviewed; thank you for helping make my writing better every day. Tanya :D With your foot stuck in the sand?” A dark brow rose ...

Thank you for the review Tanya. I'll fix the things that you mentioned. Okay, what you said is exactly what I was afraid of when posting this. Working with two ...

Hey everyone, thanks for the reviews! It gets a wee bit discouraging to put so much work in a piece and realise it needs so much more work. But I'm ...

Really, Rh, what is there to add? haha. Seriously, I loved this chapter and everyone else has pointed the nitpicks. Unlike Stella, though, I'm alright with his reaction. He thinks ...

Hey Pink! Here for a review, yay! :D “Stop it,” I mumbled, awaking from my sleep. I peered up to see my sister, Liliah Ok. It took me a few ...

Hey everyone! So this is what I came up with after listening to all your advice. Thank you for that. I hope this is a better version but feel free ...

Hey Lily, Tanya here for a review! Well, the four other reviewers mentioned quite good points so I won't delve into that. Much :D What I wanted to mention is ...

Hey Rh! Well, friend, this is an awesome start to what seems to be an awesome story. Very original, writing from boy's pov for the MC. Very interesting so far. ...