borntobeawriter

Geez, I'm third again! Haha! Hiya Pink! I do believe this is my favorite chapter yet! Yay! And wow. Great work. I'm finally starting to like Lucas. I loved the ...

Hey there Kr, Welcome back! First of all, I liked the first part. It had nice detail and expression and feelings and I could feel what she felt. Good work! ...

Haha, thanks Emma! I'm glad you enjoyed the website! And how do you get through doorways with your swelled-up head? ;) Seriously, I'm so glad my sister asked me to ...

I'm going to be very blunt here and say that I didn't appreciate your reply to our comments. We went through the effort of pointing out where you could work ...

Pink, wow! Beautiful, my friend. And you're working on a fantasy story? Really? With Elves? Can't wait ro read it.....:)

Hey Kakagirl, Well, I decided to come check out your story after reading that you wouldn't post anymore without our likes. Well. I'm here. First of all, I have to ...

Thanks everyone! Yes, I'm finally in the right direction! :D

Hey everyone! Wow, I'm so glad you all liked this so much! Pink - I groaned at first when you said I should make it a bit more formal. I ...

haha, Emma, I actually saw those mistakes but my mind refused to acknowledge it. It was yelling at me: "You're wrong! You're tired! Your eyes deceive you! This is EMMA ...

Emma. Oh. Wow. This was unbelievably fantastic! Oh wow! You know, when I'm writing, I get very intense, very concentrated but I have to assume that you are smiling, laughing ...

Emma, Pink, thank you! Your reviews are helpful and appreciated, as usual. I'm so glad that you had only slight nit-picking! yay! Tanya :D

Hey there everyone. Thanks for stopping by. This short story is for another short story competition. For those of you who have followed my writing, you know how much I ...

Hey there Pink, Thanks for the Pm! It is always a pleasure to review for you :D I found the words more powerful than anything. His voice, the sound, was ...

Well, this is the third time I've posted this. Hopefully, it will be the right one. I want to thank you all for your great help, the great reviews and ...

Hey there Emmy, I'm Tanya, here for a review. Well, this was a good beginning, in my opinion. There's a few nitpicks that I'd like to point out. I tried ...