borntobeawriter

Hey there Lise, I'm Tanya, here for a review. Well, I partly agree with what Elinor said. This prologue doesn't add much to your story that we can't find out ...

Rh! You've read my mind. I was just setting up to send you a PM and ask why you haven't posted Icefire or Warrior lately and I get this new ...

Pink! Ahhhhhhhh *sighs* Much, much, MUCH better! Great job turning this story around! Do not remove Olivia''s swearing; it works with her personality. The only thing I found that others ...

Lol, you should have seen me stalk the pc until I saw your email telling me there was a new chappy (I tried to act surprise, but let's face it; ...

Welllllllll, hey there Pink! Ok. Totally honest? Didn't like this as much. It REALLY pisses me off that Liliah is so ready to forgive the almost-rape. I know she's sweet ...

Haha! Just goes to show what a little bullying can do! Woohoo! Seriously Emma, thanks for posting :D the tyres crunching on the gravel as she drove toward the large ...

Hey there DD, I'm Tanya, here for a review! First of all, I haven't read your other chapters so my opinion will be based solely on what I've read here, ...

Pink, argh! Why didn't it say in the 'follow' that you'd posted this?? :P A tongue swept over his small fangs as walked back and forth, pacing with his hands ...

Hiya Pink! I'm first, yessssssssssss! Chapter Eight (Liliah) Um...I think it's Luke's chappie, no? Sure sounds like it...;) “Maybe I’m being overdramatic but when Hunter told me was going to ...

Hey Kaaaaaaaatie! haha Well, two people have actually commented before me. Bailey caught the mistakes, same as I did. Not much happened in this chapter but it feels a little ...

Pink, this was fantastic. You get better with every chapter you write, with every picture you paint. You draw us readers into your worlds and that is such a great ...

Hey there Underestimatedsmiles, I'm Tanya, here for a review! I eventually ended up into an old apartment, brown leather La Z Boy recliners and creaky wooden tables littering the home. ...

I probably thank Nate every time I get on this site. I'm almost 26 years old and I've always spoken of wanting to be a writer. This past year, since ...

Great, I can't wait :D And thank you for the formatting: A much easier read! Tanya

Hey there Krzyh and welcome to YWS, I'm Tanya, your reviewer for today :D First of all, I wanted to mention how good I thought this chapter was. And I'm ...