borntobeawriter

This is very fantastic indeed! Thank you for posting! I started reading and I was like "What? Doesn't she woop his butt in the previous version?" Then, I kept reading. ...

Hey there WickedDestiny, I'm Tanya and I'm also from Canada, but in Quebec! I lived in Ontario for six years, though, on a military base :D Welcome to YWS, we're ...

Holy mother of Harry Potter, you weren't kidding when you said it was long! haha Well, I'm up for a challenge! :D I liked Caitlin, but I wasn’t going to ...

Actually, I wasn't trying to picture anyone. His personality is so strong that I never stopped to wonder, "Hmm, wonder what he looks like". But this guy is pretty good ...

Hey there Shubhi, Tanya here, a little late, but here :D Well this is a definite improvement of your first part. You managed to show off Jane's personality, without telling ...

Haha, I'm Second (the S deserves a capital, don't we agree ;) ) Pink already found the mistakes I was going to nitpick. As to where the story is going....I'm ...

*growls* I'll pretend I didn't hear any of that....For now ;)

Skins! Last one! I hope I don't make too many typos, my fingers are dead! This was a great chapter. It was sweet and quiet following the action-packed previous ones. ...

Yeah, you got what I meant. But...I mean, maybe she can look puzzled a little, then smile because suddenly, she caught on to his line of questioning, you know? Make ...

Hmmm.. I have a pretty good idea where this is going. Well, sorta. Other people are starting to get it too.. If I'm right, he technically, sorta, in a way, ...

Haha, you are getting more and more 'likes', have you realised that? I have -once again- nothing to add. My arms and fingers are praying for release but I refuse ...

Skins! Great chapter! I agree with Rach about having two disctintive impressions of this. Tori's point of view, and what the reality was. Nicely done. The chapter itself was great, ...

A pair of bloodshot, tired eyes looked up at me through the small mirror at the front of the bus. The man who owned those eyes grunted something inaudible. Sniffing, ...

I have nothing to add here except Richard's a jerk. Good chapter, though. And why do I have the awful conviction that Ollie's got a terminal disease.........*sighs*

Hiya Skins. You're going to be so fed up of me at the end of this day hahaha On to the review. Because you've moved around chapters, I'm getting comments ...