borntobeawriter

Hey there Ty! First of all, thank you for the request! Second, here's a quote from the WRFF thread Forum rules 1. Only two review requests every few days. 2. ...

Skinsy, tis me! “That’s the one.” He winked at me, then paused. “You okay? You look like kinda pale, Zo.” The 'like' was too much :D This. Was. My. Favourite. ...

Yuri, Skinsy, done!

Hey there Skinsy! Tis me, to the rescue! Ok, as everyone else said, this was a great chapter. A thing or two to mention, though. Austin's apology? Lame. He does ...

Skinsy! Okay, I'm here, earlier than I thought I'd be! First off, the opening of this chapter really threw me off. I actually and reread parts of the last chapter. ...

Daughter, tis me! as usual, I loved this. My only critique would be somewhere along Skinsy's thought pattern. I don't normally mind third person POV, but here it really bothered ...

Yuri, Mommy's here! So sorry it took me so long. But I'm here now! Just then you realize your helmet flashlight is still on, and then you start counting mentally ...

Hey there Anna! Aiden slapped a hand over his mouth and widened his eyes at me. I wondered at their fascinating colour before pouting at him. Ok, this part slightly ...

I'm heeeeeeeeere! Yes, tis true! Daughter, I love this piece! I snorted at the first email, thinking "yeah right, dude. Good luck with that one." And my heart tugged at ...

Anna, so glad you've posted!!! the pavements outside a building with flashing neon lights, I had doubts for the tenth time that night. Really? Only ten times? lol “The least ...

You can no longer earn points by commenting to your work. Awesome. I always felt guilty replying to people's critiques and "earning" points for it. After posting a review, you ...

Hey there RL! I'm Tanya, here for a review. First things first, this seems to be a good concept. I like the friendship between Bren and Sophie. They seem quite ...

Shubhi! (You'll never escape that name, you know that, right?) Sorry it took so long, Mama's busy! “A ride?” he clicks his fingers straight in front of my face. I ...

Daughter! Thank you for the great review. As for the part with the crazy woman, her parents have followed Gaspar and moved over to the side. They are talking to ...

..And if there are no more stars........you get pigs ;)