borntobeawriter

Pinky! We have to get married!

We've been through this before; I have no idea.... You sure you won't tell me?

Baby girl; you're alive! And yes, RH is my daughter and your niece. Emma never got back to me about being adopted, so...Not sure yet. And, well, me, of course; ...

Pinky! Tis me! I didn't comment on the last chappy because I really couldn't see much of a difference. Didn't know what to comment on, although is was a great ...

Well, Wubby, I don't have much to say about this chappy. It was nicely done but I didn't see as much of a difference in this one as in the ...

Hey Caitlin! Your faithful reviewer here! I liked this chapter but much like this last one, I found it a little repetitive. In the last one, Max tells Caitlin of ...

Hey Bishop, Well, I know this piece is old but since you linked the page to me, I'm going to comment :D I have to agree with several comments made ...

Well hello there, Wubby. I'm definitely no good at reviewing poems but I thought this was beautiful. The words flowed beautifully, softly, almost gliding off the page in a enchanted ...

Hey Tiger, Tanya here! Well, as far as I'm concerned, this definitely has some potential. I would enjoy reading some more. I assume that if you were to make it ...

Hello there Emmy, Tanya here for a review! I started reading this piece and I kept thinking, "Wait a minute, I've read this before!" I went back and checked out ...

haha, keeping us on our toes with your spoiler, eh? Well, Katie, your story really is advancing nicely at this point. I'm enjoying more and more with every passing chapter. ...

Hey Katie, Well, not much to say here. I'm liking where this is going. The tenses are still a problem, but you know that. :D Going off to the next ...

Hey Jashy! Sorry for the delay in the review but...I just found out I have a life! haha. Seriously, Mommy's here now. Moist crept up my window as I drove ...

Rachael, Well, not nitpicks, congrats! I really don't have much to say here. You've introduced a new character and she seems sweet but nothing much happened in this chapter. I'm ...

Hey Star! Tanya here for a review! Then the stranger spoke. "Isn't it odd," said the stranger . His voice was faint and eerie, as though it wasn't quite there. ...