borntobeawriter

oooh! I really liked this! It was nice and catchy and had a great moral! Great job, my daughter!

Can we submit a short story that has been reviewed here previously? I mean, it makes no difference, right?

My Wubby! I am sorry! I read this a few days ago on my IPOD and didn't want to try to type on that device from hell, so I was ...

Hey Aimee, Well, I was curious enough to come check your work. Here I go! The beach, despite the picture perfect image it represents gives me cause for concern. there ...

Hey there Palip, Here, as requested! Thank you for the beautiful request, by the way. It's my pleasure. I'll do what I can for this one but I'd like to ...

Aw, Bick, I loved this one! I loved the touching scene between her and her brothers. I love the fact that once again, your showing us instead of telling us, ...

Hey there Bickazer! For some reason, I only just realised that chapter 4 and 5 were out. Well, better late than ever! He was hers now. Hers . Ren had ...

Hey there Star! Sorry about the delay, I've taken a forced internet break. But I'm back! She felt something crunch inside her jaw and let out a yelp of pain ...

Skinsy! Tis me, your mortal enemy/sister in law :D I remember the original first chapter of Can you see me, and this is a definite improvement. Wow. I had wanted ...

Thanks for the help, Emma. Maybe we can both convince her !

Matt - what kind of professional background to you have to offer counseling....?

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crap, crap, crap! I'm rereading all your comments to see where I might have been going with my thoughts. Up there I wrote 'that we'd spoken of it this morning'. ...

Please don't tell I'm going to have to go back and reread all my comments...*groans*

And littlepetrock? Just found out you're our grand-daughter. So...You're too young to get married yet. Speak with your mother first.