borntobeawriter

Age: 26 Nationality: Canadian, eh? (:D) Did you read all/some/none of the Harry Potter books? Devoured - Er, I mean, read them all. Did you watch all/some/none of the Harry ...

Ok, Pointe. Overall. I do not think you need to stop this story. It has serious potential. But you are going to have to find a way to fix it. ...

'tis done, Pointe! :D

Don't be shy? But there's nothing to review :'( Seriously, couldn't you give yourself a little trouble to be bad at this? I wouldn't feel like such a useless smuck. ...

Well, Pointe, All the good reviews have already been done. But, if I were to say anything at all, is to compare your chapters to those you've reviewed. Try to ...

Hey there Pointe, so sorry for the delay! Okay. I'm not sure why you wanted me to read this. You've already have many excellent reviews and they've already pointed out ...

Emmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaa! I'm here! I happened to look up in time to see you'd sent the email. Our link has not failed us! Vara didn’t know if she should feel touched ...

haha. I love this story so much! I thank my luck that happened upon it; I'm a better person for reading it. I love you characters and the ease with ...

I am extremely self conscious and rather paranoid.

I think it would help a lot, give more depth to your MC. I'm glad I helped; you made MY day! Tanya

Unfortunately, I am no good at reviewing poetry. But I wanted to mention that I thought this was beautiful and evocative and the title you chose fits nicely. Great piece, ...

Bick! Yay! I've convinced you! *You must post more. I am using the Force on you* *coughs* Maybe he could use this contract to his advantage too. If made his ...

My daughter! I can't believe this is already done. Ok. I have nitpicks about this one. But overall impressions I do. This is a good story. Good idea. But it ...

Ziggie - done! :D

Hey there Ziggie! Thanks for the request! Now um , bring me my food and I will take my seat, alright. Do what you are good at and stop all ...