borntobeawriter

Jent, this was brilliant! If I hadn't know it was for a contest, I wouldn't have guessed. If I had to nitpick about anything at all, it is that I ...

Hey there Lucas, Thanks for the notice. It would be easier to track, though, if you would send a 'private message (PM) and post the link, than an email :D ...

Skinsy! I just saw that you've posted this. I'm first ! Yay! “I’m going out.” I said flatly, standing up. comma, not period. I wasn’t in the mood for my ...

Hey there Pointe, Here as requested! The flag speared the ground. The white flag billowed up from the red, burnt, hot land. It blew in the hot wind. “Truce…. Truce” ...

Hey there, Vampyre. I'm not going to go through the nitpicks because Lupis did an excellent job of that. I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed this piece. ...

Hey there Coral, Here for a review! [quote ]“C’mon silly, before mommy and daddy wake up!” I scrambled out of my bed, rubbing the sleep from my scrunched up eyes. ...

Hey Lucas, Well, we've already been introduced by your story, but I wanted to give you a warm welcome. I found my way here because of procrastination too, so I ...

Yeah, Violet, much more easy to read this way. Thanks :D

Hey Night, I'm Tanya :D “Okay, buddy, I’ll be right back. I want you to stay put, bolt the door, and don’t let anyone in. You got it?” She directed. ...

It was truly my pleasure :D Tanya

Hey there Ultra! Tanya here, for a review :D After I while I found myself at a river and a decrepit old bridge a So I just sat at the ...

Before finding YWS, I was an all talk and no action writer. I kept saying that I’d become one but never actually wrote much of anything. Truth is, I was ...

Split it up where it makes sense, Matt. You could google for more information, but usually, it's where one thought finishes and another begins. Tonight the darkness would come with ...

Hey there, back for the second part! First, you're going to have to reread everything slowly. You keep switching your tenses from past to present. Second, I'm wondering about the ...

Hey there Divides! I'm Tanya, here for a review. Because the grammar and such has already been taken care of, I'll simply give you my overall impression. The concept of ...