borntobeawriter

Just reread: much better. Makes more sense. I'd been meaning to tell you that his dad would be a great excuse and I forgot. You did it brilliantly! And thanks ...

Skinsy, tis me! A few questions: Is Will older or younger? How early does your supermarket open? Cause here, it doesn't open until 8. Why is WIll harassing Charlie to ...

Haha. Tabby, please don't apologize! I'm sorry if it was harsh and I definitely know what you mean! I've done that for quite a few of my stories: thinking that ...

Hey there Tabby! True, we don't know each other, but that can be easily remedied! I think you did a good job on the third person point of view, especially ...

Hey there Yoda, I've seen you around, but we were never formally introduced. I'm Tanya. Pleased to meet you. I'm a huge fan of yours. Welcome back to YWS. The ...

Tis done, Day! :D

Hey there, Day. Thanks for the request! You're right; I don't read HF but this was really good. Like Kiwi said, I found the end difficult to read. Nicely done. ...

Done, everyone! Hope it helped!

Hey there, Confictura, Welcome to YWS. Feel free to browse around and PM me if you have any questions. (Private message under my avatar). My name's Tanya, by the way. ...

Haha, posted it thrice! Je parle français, moi aussi! But I'm from Quebec. Which is why I thought Lefevre was also french :D Welcome to YWS! It is very rare ...

Welcome back, Ash! Why did you leave? Tanya :D

Hey there Dark, Welcome to YWS! And don't worry about speaking your mind; we expect it from reviewers. As long as you keep in mind that it must be constructive, ...

Well, Spike, I really don't see what to say after reading Azila's great review! Haha, seriously! Nah, this was a great chapter! Setting aside my nitpicks that Azila already mentioned, ...

Hey there Boss, I'm so sorry for the delay; I somehow lost track of things in the past few days. I won't go into details with the nitpicking, because you've ...

Hello Wifey! I have to agree with Ofir, here. I love the beginning and end but did not like Luke's reaction to it all. I thought he was cold and ...