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Re: The Magi {ch.5}
Hey there Pointe, Well, this was much slower, so kudos to you. I'm not sure what you meant by saying that 'much is learned' here. You mean, the numbers on ...
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Re: DELETED!
Hey there Shubs! Well, I'm not going to go in depth because your sister and Kaka have already done a good job of it. They also already mentioned the parts ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Removed
Well, considering I've already read this, I haven't much to say. You assure me that it is normal for a Princess to be walking unguarded, and I believe you. Do ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Born to be a .... reviewer ;) *CLOSED*
Done, Day! :D
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 8
Day, I have absolutely no idea why you dislike this: I loved it! I'm glad that something big is coming, though, because this is great but something definitely needs to ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Sketch for Hawk's Sister (The Struggle)
Bailey - beautiful and sweet. You are a very talented artist. Tanya
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: What Makes a Man (Contest Entry)
Wifey, Tis me, Wifey! :D I really enjoyed this piece, and I enjoyed the emotion within it. I've seen my brother and father interact their whole lives, and my dad ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Title Irrelevent Because the Story is Being Rewritten (ch1)
Hey there Emmy, Thanks for the request! Well, I have to say that I preferred the other chapter you wrote because I had the impression that at least something was ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Born to be a .... reviewer ;) *CLOSED*
Pari, Yuri, Pointe and Taylor: Done! Sorry the review arrived so late :'(
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Funeral of an Adopted Mother
Hey there Gadi, On the Under-appreciated Literary Works by Fellow YWSers Azila suggested we come read this. And I am not disappointed in the least. Azila already mentioned the points ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: The Power of Pop Secret
Hey there Taylor! Thanks for the request, sorry it took so long to fulfill :D I see that you already come awesome reviews, and I'm not really sure what I ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: The Magi {ch. 4}
Hey there Pointe, Okay, this is my least favourite chapter of all. I want you to show us how all this came about. How did they get there, how come ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: The Magi {ch. 3}
Hey there Pointe, Ok, Pari did a great and very thorough review on the dialogue tags and punctuation. My issues go a little deeper. I'm reading this chapter and I'm ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: The Magi {ch. 2}
Hey there Pointe! Ok, well, once again, I find your story much better than Stargazer. The characters have better dialogue and interaction. I also don't remember her being wounded, and ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: You could have (edited)
Well, wowee, am I ever late! Yuri, what else can I add to this? haha. Well, I can give you my opinion, right? I loved it. Absolutely loved it. I'm ...
Jan 9, 2011