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Re: Pens and Knives [Preface, Prologue and Ch. 1]
Hey there Pointe, Well, Pari did another incredible job while reviewing your piece. What more is there to add? Hmmm. I'M not sure if this completely works for the contest, ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: One Country, Two Worlds [Part 1]
Hey there LittlePrincess, Tanya here, as requested! I'm very sorry for the delay, but better late than never, right? ;) At first, I thought you'd sent me a poem and ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: Angels - Chapter 4
Orinette, I'm here! Sorry for the delay, but my schedule has been off the wall lately. Also, of course I want to keep reading your story! You're brilliant, my dear! ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: Removed
Well, unfortuntely, I've already read this. Which means I can't say anything constructive. Nothing's changed, I still enjoy this new style you're writing with. I'm curious to know what will ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Hide and Seek (Chapter One)
Real men wear Pink! haha! “Are you gay?” My father asked. lower case. I thought this was a good opening line. “Why the hell did you buy that crap? Throw ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Born to be a .... reviewer ;) *CLOSED*
Pointe, Lana, Shubhi and Iceprincess: Done! Thanks for the requests!
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Wishes Enveloped In Paper Aeroplanes
Hey there Iceprincess, First of all, thank you for the request. It was such a nice way of asking :D Second, I am awed by your talent and by this ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: The Magi {ch. 6}
Hey there Pointe, Well, what to say? You already got two great reviews. I'm not sure what I can tell you that I haven't said throughout all your other chapters: ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Know I'm Here(3)
Daughter! Sorry for the lateness of my reply. Yuri already got the biggest nitpicks I had. My biggest issue, though, is nothing you can't fix easily. In the new prologue, ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Drawing Hands
Hey there Coral, Sorry, I'm not here do to a proper review because, well, I can't. Haha. I have absolutely no talent and drawing in general hates me. (;)) I ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: An oooold member returns!
I'm rather relieved to have someone else my age. Now I won't feel *too* old ;)
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: A Lesson In Love
I thought this poem was beautiful and heartfelt, daughter. It actually touched my heart deeply: I recognised some of myself in that. Also, at the part where she said that ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: An oooold member returns!
HEy there! Believe me, I will NOT be making fun of your age. And they won't be canning you before they can me ;) *feel free to check out my ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: You died, tonight.
Thank you earendil. I'd be afraid that people would expect something along the lines of this poem if I ever wrote another...;) Tanya
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: You died, tonight.
Again, thank you for your comments. Tanya :D
Jan 13, 2011