borntobeawriter

Hey there, Tanya here for a review! Ok, I noticed in one of the paragraphs that you wrote 'breath' when it should have been 'breathe'. Of course, I can no ...

Much, much better! It wasn't over the top: it was nicely detailed and quite realistic. Tanya :D

Day! I found this better - but still not 'perfect' if that makes any sense. You say that the wind rushed back her broken body - I really want to ...

Oh wow - what in the world? Ok, well, I've only read chapter one, not the second. But... Because I've only read the first, I clearly remember it, as well ...

Hey there Jedi, Tanya here! Well, I'm not sure what to say. I didn't find anything grammar mistakes or anything. I enjoyed the interaction between the twins, as well as ...

Hey there Day! Funny, because I meant to PM you about this a day or two ago, and then I completely forgot. Then, yesterday, while I was at work, I ...

Jagged - I'm speechless. Well, not really because I don't think that would be possible for me *smiles*. The detail and the imagery - époustouflant. Très bien fait. I loved ...

Cassi, thank you. Although, I'm slightly confuse. If it doesn't show, what mistakes have I made? Tanya :D

Hey there Tabby, I won't give you an-depth review: Jet was quite thorough. I will comment on the chapter, though. When you read about foreign cultures, strange countries or different ...

Hey there Eat, I'm Tanya. I haven't read the first part of this, and I'll only be commenting on the chapter itself. First off, I thought this was an interesting ...

Wow, Bailey. I thought this was beautiful and earnest and heartfelt. I'm sorry I can't offer a proper review, but poetry just isn't my thing. I definitely like this, though. ...

Baiiiiiiley! Tis me! Your sister-from-another-mother. The threat was aimed at the bunch of misfits assembled around a teenage girl, and surprisingly enough, emanated from the center of attention herse

It was good of Lolli to point out something . I have nothing. Like seriously. Besides the fact that your Dragon is hilarious and entertaining, of course. I love how ...

Suz, Emma, Shubhi! Thank you so much for your wonderful reviews, guys! And for making my work featured. I'M way up there in the stars *awed* Shubhi, you're right; I'm ...

Aw man, would you believe I am doing this from my ipod? Suz, my brain feels so heavy and I'm tired, so I didn't notice any mistakes. I just wanted ...