borntobeawriter

Hey there Luna, I read this on my ipod the other day and wanted to comment, but my ipod keyboard hates me. So, now, here I am! This story reminded ...

Hey there Mask, I'm Tanya, here for a review. Okay, first off I thought this was an interesting beginning. You portray your MC as being hard, but there are instances ...

Orinette, thank you for this! Okay, first off, I wanted to say this: there could never be a long chapter from you. I don't say this to many people, but ...

Happy Birthday! *pops confetti* Thank you for requesting this. I'm touched. And really, really depressed. I mean, what's there to add after Skins' oh so helpful review? ;) “Yes,” said ...

Wifey, tis me! Okay, well, I didn't comment on this because what would be the point? I gave you my opinion. But I was skimming over the comments and I ...

Skins, Pointe, Fighta, Rolf and Gheala: done! :D

Gheala! What a pleasure to read more of your work so soon! II have nothing negative to say about this scene. It was a nice blend of description and dialogue, ...

Hey there Rolf, Sorry for the delay, but I'm here now. Well, Kafka did a pretty thorough review, so I'm simply going to speak of the story. I think you ...

Paul - this was hilarious, whether you meant it to be or not. I have braces, thank you for confirming that 'myth'. Glad my boyfriend doesn't have any. You seem ...

Haha, Emmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! Thank you for posting this! I love it when bullying works. At first, I thought this was going to be very transitional, you know? Nothing seemed to be ...

For being direct and honest and eloquent and also a sweetheart, which is not always a side seen of him...;)

Having awesome avatars!

Bailey, tis me: your sister from another mother! Even when treed the cougar was formidable, and even more so since in the tree it had a tactical height advantage and ...

Hey there Paul, This was a beautiful end to a great story. I was surprised, because I thought for sure Caleb and Death would end up living death together, but ...

Hey there Fighta, Ok, I just read all four chapters and here are my thoughts. I like the idea of the lone wolf and the other pack. You seem to ...