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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Red and The Wolf

    This was very funny. A nice twist to a classic. I found myself feeling sorry for the poor lonesome wolf. :P The only thing I would cut out was the ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Lady No Soul (2)

    Twit! I can't let begging go unanswered: here I am! That being said, you have such a great way of bringing your characters alive, of making them sounds real. I ...

    Aug 14, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Stop and Stare (Part 23)

    .........then ask him about it, Zo! Geesh! LOL Ah, my friend, another fantastic chappy. Seriously. I found myself giggling as she rocked backwards and forwards. Would you believe, that for ...

    Aug 11, 2011
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Essential free book websites for those low on funds

    Amazing, thank you!

    Aug 11, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Lady No Soul (1)

    Wow, Twit. Just Wow. I read this out of curiosity, and although, as it was mentioned, not much happens in this chapter, I have no complaints. You bring your characters ...

    Aug 11, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Winners of the Big Random Story Contest

    Congrats guys!

    Aug 11, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Stop and Stare (Part 22)

    As they continued talking, Jax spun around, then locked his eyes oton Zoey and me. A large smirk grew on his face and he was soon power walking towards us.

    Aug 10, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: She's such a Drama Queen chapter 10

    Hey there! I'm Tanya, here for a review! April was a cow anyway, she didn't deserve him she was way too fake My parents were away at work as always ...

    Aug 10, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Stop and Stare (Part 22)

    Skinsy, tis me! I'm only reviewing because Nate told me to. Mouhahahaha *coughs* Seriously, though. My question is this: Why did Charlie suddenly decide to bring Austin to this cliff, ...

    Aug 9, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Sometimes, chapter Fourteen

    While she was showing everyone her haircut, I was like, "what does it look like?! I need to know! NAO." A bit less aggressive than that though. I think I'd ...

    Aug 9, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Sometimes, chapter Fourteen

    *likes, likes, LOVES* Oh man, Anna. I found myself grinning while she was showing everyone her hair, hoping it would equally impress Sonny. I couldn't stop grinning! We've ALL been ...

    Aug 8, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Coming up with a character and thier story

    Great post! Tanya

    Aug 7, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Libraeon 2

    Hey there Alice! Back for a second! Ok, first off, I just noticed that you joined on the fourth of August: so welcome to YWS! Second, I noticed that you ...

    Aug 7, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Libraeon

    Hey there Alice! I clicked on the 'Be the first to review' link on the top left and found your second chapter. Was slightly confused, so went and read the ...

    Aug 7, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi

    Hey there danny! Welcome to YWS, hope you enjoy your stay here: we're a friendly bunch. If you're feeling a little lost, you can click the big blue question mark ...

    Aug 6, 2011


Every first draft is perfect, because all a first draft has to do is exist.
— Jane Smiley