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Re: Turning the Tables(1.3)
Shubhi! Okay, I just read your first chapter, but wanted to comment as a whole. I thought this was great. It had good emotion, good flow. It was easy to ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: 2. Monday Morning Minus Moping (Redrafted)
Hey there Amie! Back for the third chapter. Ok. Theotherone already pointed out a few things, but I will also. First of all, the date. Before, August 16th 2011, then, ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: No longer a part of the novel
Hi there Amie! Sorry it took so long to get to the review but I've been quite busy! Is this the piece you wanted me to review? I would appreciate ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Little Macey (0)
Emmmma! Ok, I promise I won't get mad at Tooth, only because I got to read something from you. Really, do I demand so much? ;) Emma, I remember reading ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Annexation: Chapter One
Hey Kafka! Well, I must say I was dreading reading your piece: it's happened in the past that I really enjoyed other reviewers but always found their stories lacking. Yours ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Bread
Lupis! Thank you so much for the request :D I'm not sure what I can add that Isha hasn't already said. I thought the descriptions and details were amazing. The ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: She's dancing with Elvis.
Gracie - Thank you: she was a wonderful woman. Paul and Snoink: thank you so much for your heartfelt comments.
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: The Firebird
Jent! Thank you so much for the request! I'm not sure I'm "qualified" to review this. It has so many deeper meanings, such profound insights on life. I'm pretty sure ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: Disenchanting Ch 2
haha, first one here! Boo-ya! Except.....I have nothing to say. No nitpicks, nothing! I'm so glad you posted this. I was browsing through my reviews today, and saw yours. I ...
Feb 22, 2011 -
Re: She's dancing with Elvis.
My grand-mother died almost four years ago. I wasn't coping well with the pain of her loss. I did what I do best: I wrote about her. I'm not posting ...
Feb 22, 2011 -
Re: Part I: The Beginning--and The End.
Oh, wow, Buscador: this is fantastic! Your mc's voice is crystal clear and quite strong. I'm very intrigued by his life, his past and the choices he's made that have ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Mary-Sue: A life
Aw man, Jasmine this was hilarious! You deserve to be featured. Tanya
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Born to be a .... reviewer ;) *CLOSED*
Milk, done!
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: The legend of PAUL 5290. (Not a bible story, thanks MoMo!)
Hey there Milk, One day, Paul 5290 (His nickname was Paul) was going out for a walk. He had recently of SKINS , the Paul's God, and wanted to pay ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Mirage (Chapt. 7)
Hey there Weaver, Well, I just read chapters 5, 6 and 7. I haven't read the previous chapters, so I'm going to give you my opinions of these ones. I ...
Feb 20, 2011
