borntobeawriter

Snoink! Thank you for letting me know *hugs* When I started reading this, I felt a difference in the tone. Your MC seems older, more confident. That doesn't make sense, ...

First, first, first! And I'M at work which means I could get in trouble but... You're worth it

*I still want to slap you*

Bailey, tis me! I'm trying to figure out what I hate most: Reviewing after Azila, because I never have anything clever to add or reviewing before Azila and I look ...

RH- By weak cliché, I think she meant (Well, it's how I pictured it) the cliché of when one holds out the hand and looks ridiculous because the other doesn't. ...

Hey Snoink! Yay for whoever pressured you into writing and posting this. I think I may go and donate points to them! Lin got me a diary today. She said ...

Wow, Jent. This was horrible lol I started reading and I was like, "Oh my God! This can't be Jent's work. *Scrolls up* This IS Jent. Did someone hack into ...

'Zila! Thank you for the request. After such a beautiful phrasing, how does one refuse to review? ;) Azila, I agree with what Tiger said *pats Tiger and throws her ...

Hey there Paul! I read this way before it was featured and liked but never got around to replying. I think what I loved the most was the fact that ...

Skinsy, hello! Well, just read the first part and I'm going to comment here as a whole. I like the fact that you've changed the school thing. Mighty interesting. I ...

My daughter - So pleased to see this. I'm at work and must hurry but I wanted to comment. In itself, not much happens in this chapter. It feels more ...

Hey there Sincerity! I'm Tanya, here to review your work! First off, you have a very beautiful and eloquent writing style. It flowed quite easily off the page and into ...

Hey there Roost! First off, welcome to YWS! Hope you're enjoying your time here. I'm Tanya :D I wanted to start by mentioning that you're a talented writer. Your words ...

Hey there Ben! I saw you posted this a couple days ago but didn't have the time to review. Well, this was short. The writing flowed well and it was ...

I nominate Jenthura, MeanMrMustard and seeminglymeaningless for always giving very honest and thorough reviews. Also, I would like to nominate Azila for her equally very thorough and insightful review