borntobeawriter

Hey there Meg! Always a pleasure to read your work :D He slipped into a seat near the a wall and watched, ordering a beer when a staff member approached, ...

Uh oh.... Bastard children, little girl coming for Daddy. Well. Yeah. This was a disturbing chapter, but no worries, I am here! This chapter wasn't repetitive, thank you very much! ...

Ok guys. I hadn't originally wanted to post this edited version because many of you have read it already. But I need feedback and motivation and who better than you? ...

Hey there Anna. Thank you so much for letting me know this was posted. Might help if you gave the link, also. ;) I am quite awed by how effortless ...

Hey there Shubhi! Well, everything's been said, has it not? >.< Well, I thought this was interesting and different. You did well to portray Brandon's fear. I'd have to say ...

Me likee! Okay, well. Her plump bottom limp quivers before she takes a step forward. As she takes another elegant step, I step backwards, closer to the cliff’s edge lip. ...

Hey there Walker! First here: yay! Okay, well, I thought this was quite interesting. I liked the narrator's voice, although at the beginning, when she spoke oh her love for ...

This amused me. I've seen it for weeks now but refused to click because it said so ;) Today, I decided to rebel. This made me smile. Tanya :D

Whoa, Snoink, how in the world did I miss the last chappy! I'm so out of it! I just read the previous chapter and this one. I really enjoyed the ...

Toly and Bivrax, thank you! :D

I'm sure she's watched it already and is enjoying driving Skinsy nuts. Hell, that's what I would do.

Hey there Toly! Well, this was a great beginning. I love the descriptions and details of the tower. Beautiful. Your dialogue tagging is an issue. Here's a great thread I ...

Daughter! Finally here! Oh gosh, why do you need me after such great reviews? Well, to not be redundant, I'd have to say that I was really confused about everything ...

Wifey, tis me! Sorry about the delay! :D First off, I have to agree with Violet about the scene at the beginning. I was so confused that he just went ...

Hey there Violet, I see the great Azila has gotten here before me *sigh* ;) As she said, this felt less like HG and if you're really taking this in ...