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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: A Chit-Chat with Death, Chapter 2.

    Hey there, I'm Tanya, here for a quick review. I have trouble taking this story seriously. I grinned the whole time, because there was something very comedic about it, which ...

    Sep 9, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: The August 2011 Statistical Snapshot Spectacular

    Go Canada!

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Report A Site Bug

    I can't read the posts on the YWS blog because it's blue on blue. I have to highlight the words, which turns them white, to be able to read.... But ...

    Sep 3, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Just a Quick Word

    That's so sweet, Ben!

    Aug 30, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Sometimes, chapter Sixteen

    Hey there Anna, It took me some time to get to this. Not a proud moment

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Motel 66 (chapter 6)

    Hey there Nightly! Ok, well. Um. It is very unclear if the sin they're waiting for had to happen around them, or just happen. Why wouldn't Finch stick around, in ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Motel 66 (chapter 5)

    Ok Nightly. Back for another. You're going to have to work on your descriptions a little more. We don't get a real sense of who your characters are. Twice in ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Prologue (Motel 66)

    Hey there Nightly! Sorry it took so long to get around to this, but here I am!! This chapter in the middle of the rest is completely random. Why set ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Swan Song (17)

    Snoink. I don't know what I expected to read, but this wasn't it. In a good way. The twist with hearing Elise was a good one. A nice one. Can ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Ice Ambassadors: Chapter 1 (Edits!)

    Silent, tis me! I always hate reviewing for someone who's so eloquent, because I feel like everything but. Seriously. (Concentrate on the story, Tanya!) Right....... LOL, Silent, this was great! ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Stop and Stare (Part 24)

    Now you've done it: made me feel sorry for poor Will. He's a jerk, but maybe he just doesn't know how to deal with his emotions well. *sigh* That's true ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Sometimes, chapter Fifteen

    Annnnnaaaaaaaaa! *sigh* I love them all, I truly do. Ok, I noticed quite a few typos, but for the life of me, I can't find them again. I really enjoyed ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Red and The Wolf

    *sigh* I knew I should have caught on to that....

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Prologue & Chapter One

    Hey there Layla! Here for chapter one :D *** Inspired by Kristin Cashore's 'Graceling' and 'Fire' *** Vivian is a 16year old girl living in a fantasy world similar to ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Chapter Two

    Hey there layla! Well, I must say this was an intriguing chapter. I haven't read the first, and maybe I should, because I enjoy your style. A few things to ...

    Aug 18, 2011


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