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Re: A Chit-Chat with Death, Chapter 2.
Hey there, I'm Tanya, here for a quick review. I have trouble taking this story seriously. I grinned the whole time, because there was something very comedic about it, which ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: The August 2011 Statistical Snapshot Spectacular
Go Canada!
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
I can't read the posts on the YWS blog because it's blue on blue. I have to highlight the words, which turns them white, to be able to read.... But ...
Sep 3, 2011 -
Re: Just a Quick Word
That's so sweet, Ben!
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes, chapter Sixteen
Hey there Anna, It took me some time to get to this. Not a proud moment
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Motel 66 (chapter 6)
Hey there Nightly! Ok, well. Um. It is very unclear if the sin they're waiting for had to happen around them, or just happen. Why wouldn't Finch stick around, in ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Motel 66 (chapter 5)
Ok Nightly. Back for another. You're going to have to work on your descriptions a little more. We don't get a real sense of who your characters are. Twice in ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Prologue (Motel 66)
Hey there Nightly! Sorry it took so long to get around to this, but here I am!! This chapter in the middle of the rest is completely random. Why set ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (17)
Snoink. I don't know what I expected to read, but this wasn't it. In a good way. The twist with hearing Elise was a good one. A nice one. Can ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Ice Ambassadors: Chapter 1 (Edits!)
Silent, tis me! I always hate reviewing for someone who's so eloquent, because I feel like everything but. Seriously. (Concentrate on the story, Tanya!) Right....... LOL, Silent, this was great! ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 24)
Now you've done it: made me feel sorry for poor Will. He's a jerk, but maybe he just doesn't know how to deal with his emotions well. *sigh* That's true ...
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes, chapter Fifteen
Annnnnaaaaaaaaa! *sigh* I love them all, I truly do. Ok, I noticed quite a few typos, but for the life of me, I can't find them again. I really enjoyed ...
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: Red and The Wolf
*sigh* I knew I should have caught on to that....
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: Prologue & Chapter One
Hey there Layla! Here for chapter one :D *** Inspired by Kristin Cashore's 'Graceling' and 'Fire' *** Vivian is a 16year old girl living in a fantasy world similar to ...
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: Chapter Two
Hey there layla! Well, I must say this was an intriguing chapter. I haven't read the first, and maybe I should, because I enjoy your style. A few things to ...
Aug 18, 2011
