borntobeawriter

Hi Jayleigh! I have to agree with PinkShearwater about the god Father part. Other than that, I love it! We had agreed that in the previous (fifth) chapter we had ...

Hi Jayleigh! I love this story and I can't wait to figure out who 'Breena' is. I can't wait to figure out the story, period. I haven't been online much ...

Hi, I'm here to do a review (obviously), I'll do as best as I can. First of all, I loved the beginning. Personally, I felt myself reach for the alarm ...

Hi! I wanted to mention that personally I don't find Rose to be spoiled, but she is slightly unemotional. She feels no rage that everyone is taking over her life ...

Hi, my name is Tanya, I also really loved the story. So far, trying your hand at creepy is going well. I also thought the beginning was a bit weak. ...

Not at all Talulahbell, but thank you for apologising. To each their own tastes and we both expressed ours. It's the point of this site, isn't it. Besides, I'm glad ...

I generally enjoyed the story but, at first, I had some difficulty following your train of thought. Maybe it would have helped if you had given the man at the ...

Wow! That was a great excerpt! I'd love to read the rest of this, whenever you get around to writing it. You have an intriguing way of bringing your story ...