borntobeawriter

Hi Ella! Great read! I have only a few comments, not really nitpicks. It was raining at the airport. Fat grey droplets pouring down from an invisible shower head I ...

Thanks Melissa and welcome! Next chapter will have to wait a week or so. Glad to have you here ! :D Tanya

Okay, Hi! My name is Tanya and I finally realised I was able to post my own work, after reviewing quite a few others. This is the book I've been ...

Hey, thanks for inviting me to do your critique, I really appreciate it :D ok, here goes. Hannah's my classmate in college. We're really close being that she is Karen's ...

Hi Coco, I noticed you changed 'scruffy' to 'untidy'. Thanks for the change, MUCH better, I love it :D Tanya

I am still a fan of yours, that is for sure. As for Tristan, there isn't much to say, yet. He seems to be attached to Rose, seems to be ...

Hey, I loved this. I immediately wanted to know more, to read the next line. So far, trying your hand is going great. Please write more! Tanya

Hi! My name is Tanya, I found your story very intriguing, very interesting. The only thing I would like to nitpick about is the fact that you are telling us ...

Hi, I have nothing to nitpick on. I read the Twilight series, and even the chapters from Edward's perspective on Stephenie Meyers website. I am intrigued by where you are ...

Hi! I loved it, loved the descriptions and the characters but I really have to reiterate what I said: it sounds like the Mortal Instruments. I'm sorry but I had ...

Hi Pink!! It's pretty good. I really enjoyed reading it. I have a question though: Have you read the Mortal Instruments? Because your story sounds strangely similar... It's funny because ...

Ok, last chapter tonight. Much like Kate before me, I read everything in one sitting. I had been at chapter 5 but I reread everthing from the start because you ...

Hi again, it's been busy for me tonight, reading your chapters :D I couldn’t swallow all that had happened within moments in my bedroom. Corrigan showing up out of no ...

Love it! Your characters and story really pull me in. YOu should see me butt on the edge of my seat, my eyes inches away from my computer screen, reading ...

Hmm..I was thinking, maybe you could say like, 'think of me as your fairy god . . . father' Does that sound ok? :D