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Hey Jayleigh, Wow, I loved this chapter. Pink found the only nitpicks I had and that was easily remedied. I would also love to know how the fairies reacted to ...

Hey Pink, Ok, I read your chapter and I'm ready for the review. Here are my nitpicks... His blond hair is soft and waves slightly as he moves. Referring to ...

hi Jayleigh! Thanks a lot for the awesome review and you're forgiven any tardiness. lol I haven't had the time yet to work out the reviews of these first two ...

Thank you, thank you, thank you! It was a great review with some great advice. Third chapter should be posted soon. Tanya :D

Ah no! What a jerk! I hate Frederick! How very much like a man to assume it is the woman's fault that they cannot conceive. It is HIS fault, I'm ...

Okay, I have edited this chapter. Better? Thanks, Tanya Chapter 2 Drying her tears, Meghan put her daughter down. Rhee looked up when a tall shadow fell upon her. Her ...

Hey Ella! Thanks for Pming me about your chapter. One again, I loved your very visual style of writing. I loved that we got insight into the mother's head. I ...

Hey Jayleigh! Thanks for telling me about chapter 11! Jayleigh, I loved this chapter! I just have to say that the change from one 'moment' to another was confusing. One ...

Hi Wizkid! Thanks for the nice comment ! ANd you're right; it does lack description and it IS shock...Lol...Unfortunately, it isn't always easy being bilingual lol Tanya

It does, thank you! :D Tanya

Hi! Thanks for Pming me lol. I loved this chapter! I have nothing to add -as a nitpick- that hasn't already been said. Please pm me for the next chapter? ...

Hi Jayleigh! Thanks for the review, it is very helpful! I made the news an obvious point because it sort of helps in the story. I mean, you and I ...

Ha! Jayleigh, I loved this chapter! The only nitpick I found was minor: I tried grasped the wall of the shower To grasp? Grasping? But that was it! Keep them ...

Thanks Pink! lol Sorry about the tense. I wrote it the first time around in the present tense and now I'm rewriting it in the past. I'm doing a lot ...

Hi, I have just posted the first chapter for my book the Descendant. I would like reviews please, either fair or harsh but constructive. I'm specifying it although I don't ...